W.A.L.T Write a travel guide!
The gondolas because the gondolas are so much fun to go on . you can see sheep and grass and sparkly rocks, boats, muntins, warter,snow and the cafe
The tram is so much fun because you can go for a tour around . You can see shiny water, green trees, and boats .
In new brighton you can go to the beach, hot pools and the library cafe
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Hi Charlie
ReplyDeleteI like your travel guide as it not only tells me places of interest in Christchurch, but it tells me why they are great places to visit. Next time just make sure your punctuation is correct. Good job on posting your work to your blog. Where is your favourite place to visit in Christchurch?
Sarah
The Gondolas
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