WALT:add speech bubbles to our writing
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 26 October 2021
Ducks Writing
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi this is Liam hear to say that
ReplyDeletethis duck post is so funny and humerus it reminds me of the game hungry hippos.
My favour dog is a french bulldog cos I have one and they are so funny. 😝😝😝😆😆😆
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