WALT: Use adjectives.
Today we had to write a story about this strange image:
Today we had to write a story about this strange image:
It's a very strange photo, so we had to use adjectives and create a story about his way to get up there. I have created a story.
Let's be honest, I don't think giraffe's can climb
.
The giraffe was hanging off a broken branch.
The brown and cream coloured giraffe was stuck on the brown, stiff branch
. The giraffe gave up on being a koala because he felt extraordinary pain.
crawling down his arm while he was holding on to the tree
.
His hooves almost slipped, but he held on tight. He has wanted to experience some other animal stances, but it was tricky.
Let's be honest, for a few seconds before the tree branch snapped and went crack, he thought he was a Koala.
Hi Charlie
ReplyDeleteYou have written a great descriptive story using adjectives.Next time make sure your writing fits on your blog, I can't read all your story as it's off the side of the page. Well done on posting your work to your blog Charlie, you are doing a great job.
Sarah