Tuesday 7 September 2021

Giraffe Story

 

WALT: Use adjectives.

Today we had to write a story about this strange image:

Today we had to write a story about this strange image: 

 It's a very strange photo, so we had to use adjectives and create a story about his way to get up there. I have created a story.

Let's be honest, I don't think giraffe's can climb

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The giraffe was hanging off a broken branch.

The brown and cream coloured giraffe was stuck on the brown, stiff branch

. The giraffe gave up on being a koala because he felt extraordinary pain.

crawling down his arm while he was holding on to the tree


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His hooves almost slipped, but he held on tight. He has wanted to experience some other animal stances, but it was tricky. 

Let's be honest, for a few seconds before the tree branch snapped and went crack, he thought he was a Koala.




1 comment:

  1. Hi Charlie
    You have written a great descriptive story using adjectives.Next time make sure your writing fits on your blog, I can't read all your story as it's off the side of the page. Well done on posting your work to your blog Charlie, you are doing a great job.
    Sarah

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