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Thursday 2 July 2020
you should have a shower
I strongly believe we should shower because we might get stinky and we might get bacteria I strongly believe we should shower because we might get stinky and we might get bacteria .
Firstly, if you don't shower your hair will get all greasy and yucky, your body will be dirty and means you will smell bad!u are not healthy.
Secondly, your fingernail will get very very very dirty. This is bad because when you eat dirt finally, you can get bacteria in your body if you don't shower and you might get sick, and be very smelly.
from your fingers you might get sick.
In conclusion, I strongly believe you should have a shower to keep clean and healthy.
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