Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 19 June 2020
Fridays Writing
Shrek eats mud like a dog.
Shrek is loud and as big as a giant.
He likes to be alone.
He has short arms.
He showers in mud so always looks dirty.
He feels as happy as a smiley face.
He is a green ogre, as green as a pea.
He loves mud.
I like Shrek because he makes me laugh so much.
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good post charlie
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