Tuesday 31 August 2021

MY Writing

WALT write a letter. 
        
I really like this activity because you got to write letters to Harold.Hi Harold it's Charlie here from New Brighton Catholic School in room 1I have been doing what's a school work in different games like basketball and football 
By Herald. what have you been doing in lockdown ?
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 September 2021 at 08:46

    Good morning Charlie, Good to see you keeping up with blog post! I like how you added a question. Talking to Harold reminded me of when he came to school, next time re-read, as it says ¨By Harold¨ Are you excited for Harold Next Year? Has Harold Responded?
    Aimee

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  2. Sarah1 September 2021 at 09:42

    Hi Charlie
    You have written a great letter to Harold, I like how you have introduced yourself in the first sentence so Harold knows who you are and where you are from. This is important as Harold must get lots of mail. Next time, read over your writing to check it makes sense. I am enjoying reading your posts Charlie.
    Sarah

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