Friday 23 October 2020

A moment in time at a swimming pool

WALT :use punctuation and write in the  first  person .

I arrived  at QE2  I went to the changing room to get into my togs. I dived in the deep pool. My Mum, Dad, my brother Lucas and I went on the hydroslide. My brother screamed the whole way down! I went down after him. I didn´t scream! I went in the Lazy River in a donut....I went round and round and round. I felt sick and dizzy so I went home.

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3 comments:

  1. Bridie Sutherland24 October 2020 at 06:44

    Good work Charlie. Your writing is really coming along nicely.

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  2. Anonymous27 October 2020 at 10:23

    Hi Charlie it is your Brother Lucas good writing about Q
    QE2.

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  3. Anonymous9 November 2020 at 13:42

    Hi charile✌ good job Charlie I like to log because you put a lot of information into it from Amelia or mills

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