A moment in time at a swimming pool

WALT :use punctuation and write in the  first  person .

I arrived  at QE2  I went to the changing room to get into my togs. I dived in the deep pool. My Mum, Dad, my brother Lucas and I went on the hydroslide. My brother screamed the whole way down! I went down after him. I didn´t scream! I went in the Lazy River in a donut....I went round and round and round. I felt sick and dizzy so I went home.