Friday 21 August 2020

my narrativevendor

 Once upon time there were two, two headed monsters with ice cream heads. One of them was chocolate flavour and one of them was strawberry flavour. Their heads were covered with rainbow coloured sprinkles. The monsters went to the frozen lake, which was as cold as ice. A twisting, turning tornado came while they were there. The tornado chased them back home, they ran as fast as a cheetah. The two headed monsters live in a cave Coveted in green slime. They met a grumpy bear in their He was scary and he wasn't kind. The grumpy bear chased the two headed monsters away, they ran as fast as they could but it was too late. The bear was too quick. He ate and licked them to death. The end





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3 comments:

  1. Miss Watherston26 August 2020 at 14:08

    I loved your narrative Charlie because it was very funny! I like how you added the adjectives to tell us about the monsters. What happened to the bear afterwards?

    From Room 7

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  2. Anonymous26 August 2020 at 14:59

    the bear stayed alive but it got sick

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  3. Anonymous26 August 2020 at 15:00

    thank you room 7
    from charlie

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