Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday 21 May 2020
Monday Writing
Moppet on the Run
The guinea pig got lost. He got out of the cage because the door was left open.
Guinea pigs eat lettuce. He has red eyes and he has white fur .The guinea pig is hard to catch because he is too fast!
I liked this story because guinea pigs are my favorite pet .
Do you like guinea pigs ?
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I love gunea pigs!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi i'm charlie from rawhiti school we we have a guinea pig at a school in a classroom not our classroom though is called peanut an Oreo.I like how you describe what it looks like next time maybe describe what a little bit more
ReplyDeletewhat happened.